Originally Posted by Eye-Que

Ok..

Well I got Bishop taking this. Showcase I don't know why you dropped all those violence lines and filler shit, it really took away from your verse. You need punches and concepts man, you pretty much gave this battle up.

Originally Posted by Eye-Que

^Got that, but the unemployment office and shit was what ruined it...you had a good direction but the ender messed it up..I feel that if you word your shit better that you'll become a threat to vets around here. You have the concepts down but you need to become a little more complex and you'll do good..