Thread: The LBL Cypher
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Old 02-01-07, 11:59 PM   #79
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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No offense but where are the punches? You rhyme words and put a whole bunch of symbols as if you are pointing something out, but you're not lol

Congradulations at being able to ryhme and type fast, but where are the concepts and punchlines?

Here's my representation of you..

I'm gruesomely ripping tissue from his membrane..issues I miss-used lyrically dissed you and popped ya frame..
I'm hot with flames, spit venemous rhymes that'll intwine
and connect to your DNA..fuck up your fibroptics and the mitochondria making your RNA..

*Minus all your fucking symbols*

See what I'm saying...dude you lack concepts and good punchlines, plus not including personals and shit.

Yea, you can word shit and make it rhyme, congradulations, but dude you can't battle.
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