Listenin', In my opinion one of the best beats Ive ever heard in my life. I recorded my first ever song to this beat. Memories lol, anyway..I like you're flow, however I think you have too much energy on this, this shit on that calm beat shit..you shud be a lot more calmer on this i.m.o, howevr you know emotion is real...that's the only thing about the song you tryna spit game to you're girl and maybe you wanna be more agressive to show u the realness but shit take a lil more than agressive for this beat you kno?..lyrics are real..and flow is nice..and delivery ive talked about...however as the song goes on I get used to it but still id tone it down a lil bit nah mean brotha?..presence is good you have a good confidence..quality is aight, And im feelin how you tryna talk 2 you're girl and not sound like a pussy nigga nah mean...and if shorty is as real and cool as you be spittin for then be wise wit it, nah mean...you in a good position...anyway this was a good listen, only had prolems with the maybe "too overstressed" delivery..but other than that nice shit..dolla at me

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