Thread: cant be love
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Old 02-11-07, 10:51 PM   #6
Fran El
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From: Philly
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eh wasnt bad but doesnt have that much feeling or emotion behind it. it seems about a real person but has no real like energy i dont feel the words ur sayin it just dont seem like it hits anywhere its just there..need to make more sense with the lines because u cant really watch the wind go unless u say sumthin like watchin leaves in the wind blow..doesnt catch imagination without imagry..and on a persoanl level young relationships and wifey material just kinda dumb ya know...i dunno keep droppin and elevate
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