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Rise to Power Pt.1
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02-11-07, 10:59 PM
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Fran El
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From: Philly
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ight well man it was a cool story...flow might be on depending on your delivery for text its a lil off with the structure but def can be pulled off in audio..story wasnt bad but needs more imagry to grab attention but keep it up
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