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Old 02-13-07, 04:19 AM   #7
DEFY
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DATRUSHURTZ
I made a mistake seein' the movie, I shouldn't have looked
Ur PROOF the cliche's true, the movie is never as good as the book
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Ur movies have all flopped n' its a fact that I heard
I ain't talkin' terrorism when I say The Two Towers crashed n' burned
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Only nerds watch ur shit, those stuck with computers
Here's a challenge, find me ONE kid who's seen the trilogy that isn't a loser
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Now, the lands of the battles that went down showed hurt beings
I saw Return of the King had Minas Tirith... and minas anything worth seeing
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But that battle moved onto other places until there was victory
I then saw Pelennor Field...one of the weakest battles in history
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all in all i rekon this was a good verse, flowed nice, the punches were ok, not as hard hitting as they could be, but still a dope drop.....

AERAL
..Harry Potter movies are horrible, idunno how the hell it made the top hits,
but one thing is true the protagonist first name well describes ya girls armpits
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..I'm hungry for a win, all that witchcraft aint even heard of'
instead you should decide which craft to choose... selling or flippin ham - burgers.
-----THIS WASNT TO BAD MAN, PLAYED PUNCH THO-----
the golden boys here to murder ya, lord of the rings ready to bring ya team losses,
an Oscar? bitch then i'll turn into muhammad ali the way i jabbed you at the Box office.
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This fucker will choke, when he realises all the fuckin records i've broke,
ur creators first name is J.K. .... n we all can see you're nothin more than a joke.
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ppl look out for deals you know and this bitch has the other clowns back,
and when they see that they'll warn'er brothers... so harry potter'll lose his contract.
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aight i was feeling ya verse man...thought it was cool...like the J.K. punch, that shit was nice...with u two i feel like the verses are pretty much on the same level...they both flowed ok, had ok punches, with the exception of a nice punch from each of u guys...close battle in my opinion but ima go wiv datrushurtz coz i prefered his punches...aeral dropped a few dissin his girl, and bout flippin burgers, and im feelin thats played...

vote DATRUSHURTZ
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