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Old 02-13-07, 03:46 PM   #10
ThatsWhatSheSaid
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DaTrusHurtz

I made a mistake seein' the movie, I shouldn't have looked
Ur PROOF the cliche's true, the movie is never as good as the book
Good flow, punch connected
Ur movies have all flopped n' its a fact that I heard
I ain't talkin' terrorism when I say The Two Towers crashed n' burned
^- Ok, decent with the flippin'
Only nerds watch ur shit, those stuck with computers
Here's a challenge, find me ONE kid who's seen the trilogy that isn't a loser
^- lol ok
Now, the lands of the battles that went down showed hurt beings
I saw Return of the King had Minas Tirith... and minas anything worth seeing
^- lol didnt quite get it but i understoon the end
But that battle moved onto other places until there was victory
I then saw Pelennor Field...one of the weakest battles in history
^- Not the strongest closer

Aeral

..Harry Potter movies are horrible, idunno how the hell it made the top hits,
but one thing is true the protagonist first name well describes ya girls armpits
^- lol ok
..I'm hungry for a win, all that witchcraft aint even heard of'
instead you should decide which craft to choose... selling or flippin ham - burgers.
^- ha, i liked the flow a bit but the punch wasnt hard
the golden boys here to murder ya, lord of the rings ready to bring ya team losses,
an Oscar? bitch then i'll turn into muhammad ali the way i jabbed you at the Box office.
^-Eh, muhammad ali lines are played
This fucker will choke, when he realises all the fuckin records i've broke,
ur creators first name is J.K. .... n we all can see you're nothin more than a joke.
^- Couldve worded it better but ok
ppl look out for deals you know and this bitch has the other clowns back,
and when they see that they'll warn'er brothers... so harry potter'll lose his contract.
^- Not the best closer either

Overal - DaTrusHurtz came with the overal better verse, niether had a good closer but i liked DaTrust opener better, flow was good throughout and had more consistant stronger punches, structure wise both were about the same, but for originality DaTrus got it.

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