ya flow is a lil off, work on that, emotion is not there... quality is not great but i can understand ya lyrics... tooo short, no real hard punches.. beat was aight... ya rhyme scheme was aight too..Just work on ya emotion, and flowin with the beat... elevate and ill be peepin ya shit..holla

Peep mines and tell me what ya think...

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