The Paragraph President
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Voted For: Tha_Don_of_Mics
capo:
your flow a lot better but you mostly using personal i enjoy more wittiness by using metaphors in battle plus personals. you just used personals to get at him though you used some sly multiples i careless cause you could delivered some harder punchlines man, overall not bad nice complex rhyme scheme but you lacked metaphors man.
Kac
okay if I was dissin you i would call you a cack haha jk anyway you did what he didnt do, i enjoyed your text a lot more cause you packed metaphors in your lines. rhyme scheme was basic but you really flowed with dope metaphors. overall decent verse you get my vote.
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