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Old 02-19-07, 02:49 AM   #8
iamthatdude87
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ight beats coo but i dont think ur flow was smooth enuff for this beat....so choppy.....delivery is blan.....u needa keep the listener interested......hook is ehhh monotne.....choppy!!!!!!ruins the whole vibe.....i like ur lyrics tho.....overall this was decent at best....
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