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not a song to raise your voice on like you did....you gotta drop it an octive n make it sound more sincere......n like tito said slowwww down a bit n let what your sayin resonate....thas what you gotta do with these loves songs....cuz the ladies your rappin too, dont pick shit up as quick as everyone...ya know? good flow n all tho....jus work on matching the right flow scheme n vocal octive to the right beat.....
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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