Good Looks on using my beat man...ok yea man the flow is shaky on this one man..u took a step back here son..you've flowed smoother on other joints...but storyline tracks will do that to you..its hard to have deep flows when telling stories....delivery was blan too man u really need more emotion in ya voice for this one....hook coulda been way better if u flowed it smoother...did 1 take the flow? like rap all 4 bars strait thru? if so u should broke it up an record it in overlapping pieces. Overall man this was a good idea/ an the right type of concept for beat but jus wasn't executed right man u need to polish this one fo real but once again good looks on using my beat....1

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