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Old 02-19-07, 08:12 PM   #7
DaTrusHurtz
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Vida's got me quaking in fear, while nations are burried in tears
Its why there's been a peace movement to rid of Guerra for years
You have the nastiest taste, this beast should be in cage, De Im really amazed...
Cuase if I'd see her in my dreams I'd bath in holy water and confess every sin that I've made
I wouldnt hit it after shots of Everclear, her ass should be serving years
Crack's been worldwide since her g-string now seperates the Earth's two hemisheres
She wouldnt serve well as a pet, dirty bitch doesnt shower and afraid to get wet
Her dandruff can make Global Warming seem like its at a catastophical threat

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Nothing

Wow, this wasn't even close. Slouch, u had quite possibly the most inconsistent verse I've ever seen. lol. U had a lot of filler, u should have went fewer lines and just used your 16 best lines or so, but u had some really dope shit in there. Earth's hemispheres was my favorite line, that shit was really funny, creative, and hard hitting, good shit. DEFY, even tho u only posted 10, thats not why u lost. U lost cuz ur verse had nothing even remotely creative or hard hitting in it, just a bunch of basic shit. U gotta work on bringing concepts whichi are a bit more fresh.

Vote - Slouch
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