u didn't re-do the hook jus because of criticism did u?

but yo...u sound like one of those Yugio characters...hot


lol...


flow works for this beat...

wut about ur wife?


hmm...slick rhyming in spots


interesting sound to the track


Hook: it's ok...def. creative...but the Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa part is kinda contrived...


2nd verse...comin wit a focused rhyme scheme...slick...but u gave up on it too soon


Good track tho man...def. good


RTF please

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240122


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