u didn't re-do the hook jus because of criticism did u?
but yo...u sound like one of those Yugio characters...hot
lol...
flow works for this beat...
wut about ur wife?
hmm...slick rhyming in spots
interesting sound to the track
Hook: it's ok...def. creative...but the Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa part is kinda contrived...
2nd verse...comin wit a focused rhyme scheme...slick...but u gave up on it too soon
Good track tho man...def. good
RTF please
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240122
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