yo i feel your first verse was ill....n it seemed to be the climax of your song....the rest seemed like resolution.....slowly declining.....you slim woody haha your new rap name which your wife says is an accurate depiction hahah jp....your emotion even dropped more each verse.....honestly spend more time on your shit....i was so excited for this song after that first verse even tho eminemish its like old to middle eminem ish and since he dont do it no more its nice to hear someone do it......the acca shoulda been slowly fading out at the end not to end harsh like that.....good shit is it just me or did your quality suddenly get better.....?

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