okay returning the favor, been a mad long time since I peeped u....awww u just reminded me why I always hated swollen drumz beats....I think hook come in too quick, I came in so quick an abrupt I was halfway in before I realized it was hook...so far this is alil too offcolor of a song for me to really get into....but u rocking the fast flow nice...but being that u really trying to tell a story or make a point u should flowed slower so ya lyrics coulda been front an center....quality is decent but u need to bring up ya mids more so ya vocals gain more clarity....overall it was decent for what it was...jus not my type of song ya dig but keep doin what u do...1

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