damm!!!!!!!!!!!
This shit was too creative dawg
Yo I don't know how to put this in words right now...
... the vocab was crazy, rhymes where nice, straight flow... but the concept of this is what blew me away... storytelling on it's way to perfection... no exaggerating either... and you make each verse decent in length and to the point...

I haven't read much from u... but I got to say this is the best so far...

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