peepin ur new shit i kno u said u droppe dur album now, tha hook is ill nothin major but fills tha blank.. flow is ya main thing i like man, thats what stands out to me, like alot of ppl i really like pay attention to tha lyrics to feel it but i really wouldnt even have to kno what ur sayin just tha flow is appealing to me.. if that makes sence.. vocab is good, sumtimes to me it seems like ur focusing too much on using complex words tho.. ok nvm tha intro wasnt tha hook tha hook is ill i like it.. wassup tho this track is kinda short it was almost just like a teaser type track but o well i thought it was someof ur bteter work glad to hear ur makin steps only thing that i can recommend to improve on in tha future is the cadence in your voice, not that u stick to one tone, just that i think if u focused on a wider range that is the only thing rite now seperating you from tha pro's u kno?

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