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Old 02-25-07, 04:52 PM   #3
M the Literal
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It's really not that great. Very simple rhyme scheme, nothing too interesting to speak of. Trotting out run-of-the-mill MLK and Ghandi references, but not even running with 'em. I can't imagine how it'd sound in my head, even; a lot of the times, the lines don't run clean.

Needs a lot of work.
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