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Old 02-25-07, 10:27 PM   #9
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Sureloc
i'll set your offensive lines on fire hoe, this ain't concerning puss
you gonna be one hell of a religious team when you met with burning Bush
^_lol
yeah my record wasn't much, in fact, it was quite gory
but I won't have to beat your ass...
cuz my fans will fight for me
^-..ok
and you may got a nice team, but you ain't the boss, what
i mean, hurricane katrina is a metaphor in itself for why you're washed up
^-decent
my team is great, i been more and then
cuz I can go at QB so hard...
I'm bound to start up the legendary Bridge Wars again
^-ok
i hand losses to fags, with the rhythm i'm given
but we all know your a disaster, like the city you live in...
^- i like it


GKilla
Pickin' the Raiders for your team, helps me easily hand ya da loss//
What kind of team loses every fuckin' game wit' the legendary Randy Moss//
^-lol good question
Did you plan to ruin his career, wit' your teams weak ass offence//
Raiders have so many interceptions, you cant even blame da defence//
^- didnt like so much
You cant hold the N-O, down.. just cuz our whole city drowned//
We rebuilt so quick, and now the saints are the talk of the town//
^- yeah but where the punches
And you boastin' about fans man, name one dude that dont hate ya//
People on the free agent list, dont even wanna be a fuckin raidah//
^- ok
Next year the title is ours....., well your team for sure will blow...//
So buyin NO season tickets, is the only way you'll see a superbowl//
^- didnt come with as good a closer as sureloc
Overal - both came ok, Sureloc came with more punches and i like the wordplay, Gkilla had some good lines but his verse needed more direct punches n he didnt have that, both flowed ok and each had unique structure but i gotta give the vote to Suireloc

Vote- Sureloc
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