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Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
yo man its pretty hillarious you think i live like a petty man. i called it exactly how i saw it, i listened to the track twice just to make sre i wasn't jumping to any conclusions. but if you think my response is anything less than honest, feel ffree to point out anywhere where i misstated anything. if you can find a false statement in anything i said, i'll retract the entire thing.
i just didnt' think the track was hot dude. no need to get watery eyed over it. it sounded liek you were jsut all over the place, and the pieces i took the time ot highlight just illustrate why so you wouldn't say i was pulling statements outta thin air. if you want to get detailed i could break down the entire song bar for bar exactly why i thought it sounded cobbled together, unprofessional and all around halfassed. i mean is prozac and culdesac relevant to you? sounds like a typical "internet audio". if you see stuff like that as innovative, hey man more power to you.
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lol, calm down it aint as epic as u making it out to be..my feelings aint hurt lol. I wasn't getting defensive I jus simply offered a rebuttle. I can respect that this track wasn't hot to you we all have our tastes...all I was saying is that I disagree that this song was incoherent nonsense...Its essentially me bragging, its not deep at all, it wasn't meant to be deep...is was jus me bragging in my own unique way. If u were to say that its the type of track that would alienate some listeners...I totally agree, this isn't something I would spit on the corner. Thats what I use the net for "experimentation." But, nonetheless everything I said made sense an was pieced together right, u obviously jus didn't follow me....like your obsession with my bar "pen is my prozac da page is da culdesac" if u know what those two words mean an add the bars that follow them they are placed fine.....heres the bars in context:
My pen is my prozac, the page is the culdesac//
Used for refuge from the pews of life, tight wedged
between things known to crack//
A few vertabrae, the weight on my back murder days//
So, I gotta perform some open rap sugeries//
^^^thats nonsensical? thats not deep or hard to understand at all in my opinion.
or the other rhymes u critisized....my use of the words "jetpacks" & "baggy robes" again lets put it in context:
My
private jet's, my rhymebook sheets//
Takin' quantum leaps over crack rocks on the street//
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Only guy sharin' god's spot atop the globe//
Rockin' a fitted, some kickz an a
baggy robe//
^^^this makes no sense an is jus randomly thrown together?
c'mon man..thats all I'm saying...I'll post both full verses for ya if ya like. I mean who cant understand this stuff?
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