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Old 03-10-03, 04:50 AM   #2
Orikle
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Nice shit there dogg, I liked the wordplay and ideas used in here, rhymin was good in some bits but I reckon the flow was a little inconsistent still, picked up well in most parts, its a nice piece man, I feel it.

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