firstoff.....beat is risky....i find it annoying but i can see it maybe being catchy....but just annoying to me.....now that thats done.....

you found calm on the mic, i feel like the beat needs to be a tad louder you are above it too much....lyrics from what i heard were pretty good, the structer was nice....nice patterns in rhyme scheme.....the hook was lame....sorry but it was.....work on that seriously....your verses are pretty dag good tho.....some of your lines seem one or two words off from flowing real smooth.....not bad but i feel like it coulda been put together a little better....your presence is real nice tho quality wise......

rtf on my I TRY track

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