i hate listening through myspace..compresses the tracks and makes the quality not so good....

but anyways.......im loving this beat..its ill man....

when u say "im racing to be the best" it seems kinda rushed...smooth that out when u re record....ahh man i think on the hook....i didnt really listen to exactly what the sample was saying...but i think at the end of the bars...u should repeat the ends of the lines of the sample...just to make the hook a lil more catchy...so people have something to sing with.....do it in kind of a melody.....im tellin u...it would be dopeness..i was just doing it in my head.....pretty catchy lol........

i LOVE the make it rain line........this is a dope track man...really...when u redo...MIX THE FUCK OUT OF IT....get this sounding as good as u can....cause if its done right....there would be some serious bumpage on this track

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