definately seems like your opening was read off paper like when u say words like son it doesn t sound real ionno yea u got the 4x4 flow stiff as wood dawg u gotta roll some of that shit off ya toungue man listen to some prominant rappers gather a vibe of some different steez and mould your own like listen to the way u say vertibrate ur allowed to use pauses for effect man i will say ur gettin better but u gotta stepo ut the box

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