The Epitome Of Greatness
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Professor:
Fuck a break, I'm moving in cause this Slouch ain't delveloped
And I'll give you such a hunch, that Quasimoto will be jealous
^^I liked this..concept a bit played but u did a good flip
Wanna make moves on my girl? Well she'd rather slap you tard
Cause you can't passed foreplay when you can't count that far?
^^this was alright..coulda been worded better but still good
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Slouch:
I got a hump to envy? Your girl would second the notion
Bitch you got a face that's erosive, it ASTOUNDS dude...!
Quasi would be ringing them bells in hopes the sound would drown you!
^^witty bar but i wasnt feeling the structure
Wtf @ giving me a hunch, you aint really deep, you silly b
My philosophy on wax alone goes over your head...
Overshadows your Eyedeas and got you faded with Abilites!
^^decent try.. i get thebar but the punch was wack and the setup was too long
overall i feel prof got this one he had one good punch and an alright punch.. although if slouch had made his structure and wording better he would have won
v// professor
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