I agree.. I mean, it's a'ight to drop a full rhyme... but, honestly you should be workin' more on one verse at a time... you need some serious elevatin'... your vocab is kinda small, your flow is a'ight for the most but it's kinda hard to follow... some rhymes seemed forced..... an' that hook.. shit was weak, serious.. before you try the deep end, start in the kiddie pool... lol, keep elevatin' dawg..

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