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Old 03-03-07, 10:32 PM   #11
Popcorn.
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From: Westerville, OH (614)
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SeanGunner:
Call me the DA the way I persecute wack frauds,
Once I showed my case they declared him guilty as charged
^What in the hell? Not too good, and doesn't really rhyme. 1/5
Man my shits rhymes right, how bout you get your accent right,
Just mad the last thing he shined on was a picture in lite brite.
^Huh? Blah, not very effective. Weak. 1/5



Showcase:
That punch was stupid...it's obvious you won't get far,
If anyone ever said sean-bright, they were talking about a star.
^Um, if there is a star really named Sean then it'd be cool. 1.5/5
No chance of murdering this art form, maybe next time,
But for now, how can you possibly kill text? You can't even end rhyme.
^Heh, this funny, not very good but still a cool clownage line. 2/5




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