pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP:
wow... this is the greatest piece i've ever read... written in blank verse, so no criticism or anything on specific rhym or meter, because there is none... thank you for sharing this with me man, this was definitely worth the minute and a half to read it all...
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance
my poetry:
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