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Old 03-05-07, 12:40 PM   #12
DaTrusHurtz
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Fuck a break, I'm moving in cause this Slouch ain't delveloped
And I'll give you such a hunch, that Quasimoto will be jealous
The setup kinda hurt this cuz it didn't lead well into the concept at all. Bar is okay, not great, but still haven't seen it before

vs.

I got a hump to envy? Your girl would second the notion
Bitch you got a face that's erosive, it ASTOUNDS dude...!
Quasi would be ringing them bells in hopes the sound would drown you!
This is really stretched and that takes away from it. You coulda said the same thing in 2 lines, but the concept here is really cool
Wtf @ giving me a hunch, you aint really deep, you silly b
My philosophy on wax alone goes over your head...
Overshadows your Eyedeas and got you faded with Abilites!
Nah, I felt this was kinda too corny to really hit

vs.

Wanna make moves on my girl? Well she'd rather slap you tard
Cause you can't passed foreplay when you can't count that far?
You shoulda fed of something he said instead. I wasn't feelin' this, felt it was too simple

You both had an okay first bar and fell off a bit in the 2nd. Slouch u gotta fix ur stretchedness, but that first bar of urs was the best in the battle and won this for u.

Vote - Slouch
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