beat is real cool..im likin it

chorus...sounds like you rushed the last 2 lines. lyrics are cool but im not sure if its catchy enough..

verse 1 - not feelin dudes voice..he sounds a lot different from the last time i heard him..lyrics are cool. nothing really special that stood out but it was cool

chorus is the same

verse 2 - your voice sounds strange..lyrics were decent so thats cool. flow was somewhat the same throughout so it got kinda repetetive..


nothing special about this song..lyrically i think untamed came better...but your voice is a lot more bearable than his...keep doing what you doing