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Old 03-07-07, 06:41 PM   #10
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O RLY:
when ya get stuck, you can hit a switch man, and ditch
n' ya you can teleport, but isnt that running like a bitch?
dude is all green and shit, fags looks like a veggie brute
but mandarin?, he just sounds more like an orange fruit


M The Literal:
All brute force, but not a bit of brains
Ya'd look in the sky too long and drown yourself in rain

I'll keep it short - you ain't man enough to finish the myth
So we'll put you in women's clothes, true to your inner nymph


Wasn't feelin this battle at all, both of you came with fairly weak verses, I didn't really feel any lines were quotable, I just quoted the 2 that were better than the others from each of you. Teleport line was ok from RLY, Mandarin/fruit line was a nice concept but poorly worded, you coulda made it hit a lot harder. The rain line from Lit was ok, but doesn't really hit hard, the nymph line coulda been flipped better to be more effective. Overall, neither came hard, but I feel RLY was more consistent, the first two couplets were ok as well, where the rest of Lit's verse wasn't good.

vote = O RLY
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