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Old 03-07-07, 07:07 PM   #13
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From: Jersey
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TonyTone:
Bitch, ya life's been dead, why should I care?
I aint seen dude since the fantastic 4
...............was still fantastic, or even on the air!
Big heavy fat dude, but really, u still a bitch at heart
Gal got the whole world in his hands, n the shit fell apart

Yo im a whole nother species, somtin like, somtin u cant see
Just live up to ya name Gal <---be all the bitch that u can be

Decent verse. Opener woulda been cool...but you're rockin purple too, lol. Some cool lines though.


DaTrusHurtz:
Aiyo, lets make a deal while I'm chillin, ur stupid
I'll show u pigs can fly...
... u show me one OTHER super-villain that's jewish
My verses are the illest, i'll hit this guy's chin
I'm comin' with fire, like what ur ugly daughter Anya died in
I'll let the past speak, just look at the facts geek
There's only 1 dope mag, and its the one I produced here last week

Started off nicely, first three couplets were all cool, fell off with the last two couplets though. Still a decent verse overall.

This was a pretty close one, both matched up evenly as far as quotables and lines I wasn't feelin, but Trus' verse hit harder imo. So he gets the edge.

vote = DaTrusHurtz
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