This mah opening verse for a song im doin "Stage Fright".reply some shit here.1

((Verse 1))
My body starts to shake, if I hesitate am I fake, what will they think/
Jumpin outta my skin, afraid to look, I wont blink/
Take a drink, my throats dehydrated, wow the crowd, my pupils bursting dialated/
Im thirsting, I feel violated, the heads are yellin, im bein annihilated/
Im above the clouds, but my feet are stuck to the ground/
I look around, I hear cheers im frozen/
gut wrenchign spears, face my fears, im the chosen/
trapped within my lungs,my words are stuck/
My time to scorch it, bringin guns, force it, raps my funds, so I dont give a fuck/
cause this is my one shot, time to done blow up the spot, I rap alot why cant I talk/
I feel so outta place im like a Blood doin the Crip walk/
Call me black hawk cause shits goin down, bang shit I astound, shits throwin down/
I aint a joke,I aint a clown, by why the fuck wont my voice make a sound/
I think I need a vest from my heart,right from the start its blowin through my chest like bullets/
I love to spit but holy shit, it feels like im rappin for cats with mullets, but damn these are my fans/
weighted to the ground, walkin through quicksand, talkin to trick my hand to grab the mic/
grab the knife, stab the light,end this misery and plummet/
I got knots in my stomach, im afraid to swallow/
laid down raps on paper but my memory feels hollow, look how I battle myself, its too hard to follow/
What happens when I forget my instincts, in debt to blood and sweat, its now distinct, I aint gonna be another rapper poppin off as extinct/
Courage over myself, I gotta solve this equation, evolve songs through my cords as an invasion/
Why am I so scared, Im fuckin amazin, bobbin heads gone crazy, one shot to blow it, I know shit cant faze me