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Old 03-09-07, 02:00 AM   #2
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feelin this beat..your vocals sound a lot more clear

lyrically this is comin off real nice..better than the last time i heard..a big difference from your other tracks about gangster gangster stuff. i like this side better for you.

your emotion matches this beat nicely. just certain words sound weird when u say like "ear"..i think you pronounce it too well. yeah its weird but maybe lay off the end of the word to give it a better sound..

hook is real empty..gets boring and its hard to hear what dudes sayin..fill in that space at the end of the hook...end of the song is wacky..kinda fell off a lot.



beginning of the song is real nice..just the end is so plain and boring
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