i like the piano in the beginning...dude this beat is hot

intro..talkin in the beginning..its cool..a little long..but you get the message across


verse 1 - i like the multis in this nice..never heard you before..breaths sound real loud so its kinda weird..lyrics i like...definitely something people could relate to..i like that last line.."i dont wanna live but i dont wanna die" good job

hook - mixing isnt too good...make the recording centered a little louder

verse 2 - here u come with more multis which is cool but might take away from the song cause it might be hard to tell what you sayin...flow is simple and stays consistent..jus might get a lil boring....

verse 3 - i wish you woulda came a little more personal..a lot of what you say is real general..its cool but if you brought something a little more personal it woulda been more deep..just my personal opinion.


overall a cool track..never heard u before..something refreshing for me since im not into a lot of the gangster gangster songs that are posted on RV..get at me if u wanna collabo on a track...