it was a nice story tell.... pretty good but like fran el. depending on how u flow is how it goes... still i liked it... ur wording could have been better in some places... in others it was good. u could step up ur vocab a bit. but this was pretty decent. no doubt. good shit... i hope to see u improve some fam. check my shit out. the vibe of words...

and ps to P.A. leave better feed numnut! u aint gonna get fined for each word u right.... all ur feed is less then 2 lines... pick that shit up

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