Thread: P.A. vs Shiest
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Old 03-11-07, 12:09 AM   #6
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Sheist. You had 1 Good bar man. and you worded that shit terribly. your punches were weak, personals was eh. Only one you had was the one about his open mics...wordplay n concepts were def. weak


P.A.- Ha. i liked your wordplay man. Straight sounds like some street shit. The structure was off, but you still killed it in personals. You def. talked shit about everything you could, bein how new you are. shorten your lines up a lil bit, but other then that you good.

v/P.A.
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