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Old 03-13-07, 10:05 PM   #4
Paranoid
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blackmage quality seem a bit weird, not sure what set up you rollin with but sounds kinda diff. your eq levels could go up a bit. your flow is decent, delivery is alright but you also lack emotion, try yellin a bit more or somin. overall decent verse man. Your hook is alright its a lil catchy. Q yup you just spittin raw, nice flow and good pronounceation. your lyrics was coo and ya delivery was hot. overall tracks pretty coo yall
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