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Old 03-14-07, 10:11 AM   #8
i.e. hypocrisy
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this is tough for me cause i'm not too familiar with this war...

showcase: i liked your verse, i'm pretty sure only the second to last line was the only reference to the crimean war, but for the rest of the piece u did a good job of shitting on the ottoman emp. some lines were stretched which messed with the flow a bit, but nothing horrible...

DaTrusHurtz: pretty good verse too, that czar concept was great, but i felt it could've been worded better, still hot tho, and the closer was really good, the use of russia=rush ya, that was hot, flow was a little off at points with a couple of longer lines, but it wasnt bad...

Vote:DaTrusHurtz...i enjoyed both verses, but i felt that czar line, and the closer were great lines and won this battle...
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