Beat - Its decent
Hook - yo homies you forgot la ti and doh!... haha, but pretty creative.

First Verse: Quality is really weird, it keeps sounding like your near the mic, then it sounds like your far away from it.. lol, but it had some pretty decent lyrics in there.

2nd Verse: This was much better then the first verse, I liked the flow .. .and the rhymes was niice fo' sho' good delivery.

3rd verse - hated how this started, again it sounds like your runnin' around the booth while your recording man, either stand still or I dont know what your doin' man, but its really weird. But once you get past that, the lyrics are pretty decent again, nothin' that great.


basic bars is the way to flow?.. nah mayne.. haha

overall, decent track I guess, 2nd verse was the best in the track, im guessin' that was tha q. stay up though, I might check out some of your other tracks black, I hope they all dont sound like this one though.

I'd give this a 6/10

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