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Old 03-14-07, 04:10 PM   #9
tiggobitties
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sureloc-beginning seemed bad but it got better as i read on...good wordplay throughout the verse, flow could be improved..i liked the closer

trouble-nice verse throughout the entire thing...also had good wordplay (slightly better and more effective than surelocs)...also a good flow...you also had some hard hitting punches and personals

id say trouble took this in every category, although wordplay was a close one

v/troublesome
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