beats dope....

shit is nice, delivery's nice, lyrics are dope, flows on...

n i agree with what 286 said bout the hook, seems like the note needed is just outta ur range, but still sounded nice, alot higher that i could get, but you might wanna try a version using the above advice n try a lower hook n compare the 2, the end hook i liked the way you did up too, like 286 said, a lil lower than the others,

this was a nice listen man, good stuff...

listened a couple other of ur tracks, cant hold me especially interested me cuz i sued the same beat about a year ago, you did a real nice job on that shit guy, keep it up man...good stuff...

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