Mixing is fucked up, beats nothing decent. And switch of rhyme scheme doesn tmean ya switching ya flow.
lay your verse three times, you vocals sound too thin and empty. Laying them three time will ad thickness to it and make them more "solid"
Im'a speak truth, Im not feeling this man, its boring as fuck. You sound like your falling asleep your self just after the two minute mark. Meh, its ok, but I think you hyped yourself up a bit, no wait, way to much.