beat - its ok
hook - annoyin'

verse one - his flow is good, he had some niice rhymes, mainly just talked about killin' somebody, but its ok i guess.

verse two - your verse was better, niice flow good delivery, iight rhymes.


overall track, nothin special.. but keep it up! oh and i hope your homie took his vest off, cuz i thought i heard him say he couldnt breathe!! hope he's iight

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