Face down - a position that you're used to
Getting whipped just like the wrong end of a pistol
^^mehh
Let's get this clear as crystal - you're prone because you like it
Try to tell everyone you're hard? We don't buy it
^^nah.. bland as hell
The only thing raw about you is your back
You're a sick motherfucker, ya get off on the whipcrack
^^no
With a switch - you're the only willing prison bitch
Straight up fillet* you like you were a landed fish
^^nah, ok concept tho..
Bet you wish that the spectator would join in
We know you ain't talking cars when you say "I like rims"
^^lol, ok
Ya won a medal for the Best Tossed Caesar
They'll understand - take a breather, 'cause I bet your knees hurt
^^iight
wording pulled up in the end, in the begginin tho it wasnt harsh or had any cleverness to it. but then the concepts started showing so i'll give you that.

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see some ppl go to jail cuz of felonys..some just to get hard
the expression on ya face sum's up your reason to go behind bars'
^^iight
you get it rough from the back when other inmates hit it
bleed so hard you turned the color of the cell bars different
^^ok
he get's takin advantge of...cause you too frail
since you literally play the roll of being a stuffed kid in jail
^^lol, ok
or maybe jails ya life, you may enjoy it what the hell
he aint taking about phones when you say i need to cop a cell
^^ok
got ya arms up, cause your controlled by a fag named jim
could the guy with his hand up ya ass be ya man or you cheating on him
^^nah
if you not sucking dick, that cell to you is a bore
the bar in the middle of ya face shows exactly what your waiting for
^^lol
more impact here, alot of more thought out concepts and the wording wasnt bad at all, it was actually comical.. pretty coo punches

v/Trey MethodZ