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Old 03-10-03, 06:17 PM   #9
varentao
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Heh, made me laught...but also has serious points to it too...

...to say this aint poetry is ignorant...it's about a homeless man who, to stay sane, gets pleasures out of sniffing anything 'stimulating' he can find, which is a paint can..


..being homeless, he aint had some in a while...so out of desperation, and possible loss of mind (even if only a bit, or only for a littlw while) peeps into a window looking for a cheap thrill...

...i dunno what state of mind he wrote it in....dunno if he was taking the piss...or putting forward serius points using some sort of comedy form (satire i think..)....but it was a good piece...

...even though i felt he could've done more with it....at times seemed to be a bit too elaborate....

..respect...
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