Still readin the blah On the shitter, cuz you can't afford to stop it
How the hell you goin to enjoy a shit...With four dudes watchin.

vs.

no one ever said you needed to be liked for you to be rapping
but damn you gotta be hated to have mans best friend attacking
most people incarcerated get an ID number.. but this aint fair
cuz that on ya chest aint a prisoner number...
...its how many times you've been raped since you got there

I got Area takin' this one. Civilized, thought the takin' a shit line was funny cuz from the pic it kinda does look like that, but wasn't feelin' much else. Just felt your bars were worded a bit indirectly on the pic. As u practice more i'm sure u'll improve. Area, man's best friend line was really nice, liked that a lot. Other line was only okay, but felt everything in ur verse was at least average, a pretty consisent verse, just work more on the creativity to land those haymakers.

Vote - Area51