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Old 03-22-07, 04:51 PM   #9
DaTrusHurtz
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See he ended up like that cause he tried to kill me
look like he just woke up wit a tattoo on his ass sayin 'love billy'
looks like they dumped a referee out and said 'we'll be back later'
they got him in detriot for blowin a tech..
..and the cops didnt like the pacers

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tiggo, u gotta work on gettin' more creative. Even datruth line, tho a personal, was really played cuz i've seen like a 100 lines that look like that. Sayin' he ain't got a GED, wood... that's all basic shit, u gotta be more witty and make crazy comparisons that make the reader laugh. Pryce, u were really inconsistent.. which is yea, i guess what happens when ya don't spend much time on the verse. A few lines weren't bad tho n' u were much more consistent so u got this.

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